Persuasive Article Writing Secrets
Actual Testimonial,
I just want to thank your for P.A.W.S This is the most incredible training available, I have bought several e-books on the
Internet to learn how to write articles for my business to no avail.  P.A.W.S  is chock full of everything I needed to finally start
writing professional articles.  Using The Article Writing Blueprint, The Involvement Templates, Paragraph Transition
Templates,  Resource Box Templates, Headline Modifiers Etc will increase my sales big time and I thank you for that.
The story format of this e -book is amazing, what a great way to learn, The story of Marcus and the old man is a pleasure to
read and the story alone is worth the price. I never thought I could learn so much by reading a story.
David thanks for your hard work and time to create such a high quality and useful product, I know I will
profit from it.
D L Barnes
Click Here to read a sample chapter, you'll be absolutely blown away!
TECHNICAL SYNOPSIS
Introduction                                                                
Well, this is kind of where the introduction is… Not much going on here save for my
plea that you read the whole book… You did do that, right?
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_Chapter 1                                                                   
Sets the scene for the story to unfold and introduces the main characters of the
story: Marcus, a newly married man whose wife lies critically ill in a medically
induced coma and a wizened old gentleman who we later come to know as “Ed”.
(Dr Edward Lowe, Consumer Psychologist)
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_Chapter 2                                                                           
This chapter introduces the concept of the number one rule in advertising and also
the concept that it is possible to influence the buying decisions people make by the
words they read or hear.
•        Getting  into the customer’s head                                            
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Chapter 3                                                                        
This section illustrates the point that you absolutely must understand: What it is your
customer wants from you.
Uses the article “Don’t Mess With Texas” to make the point that you need to
intimately know who you are selling to and need to “get inside their head” to
understand their motivation.
•        Don’t Mess With Texas! ( article)                                            
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Chapter 4                                                                                              
This Chapter introduces the concept that Internet Marketing offers the opportunity
of working at a time that suits you from any location in the world.
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Chapter 5                                                                      
Introduces the concept of the behavior of Internet Surfers and the brief amount of
time they stay on one site.
-Notes that every piece of information on the Internet is competing for your
customer’s time.
It explains the motivators of pain and pleasure in customer buying habits and the
need to understand the person’s exact problem.
Introduces the five steps of the “Article Writing Blueprint”
•        Statistics on surfing habits and spam mail                                        
•        Pain, problem and predicament ( the 3 P’s)                                      
•        Identifying the exact problem                                                            
•        Article Writing Blueprint ( 5 Steps)                                                    
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Chapter 6                                                                        
The typical reading habits of internet surfers are noted.
The Author introduces the mechanism that article writers use to make sales.
He also discusses the concept of using keywords and titles to attract attention,   
and the importance of a powerful first paragraph
Discusses identifying the real underlying story you need to tell.
Explains the use of sensory commands or asking questions in the first paragraph
of an article and the use of “truth statements”
Explains the need to understand our objective, the target audience and have
knowledge of our product.
•        Only 15 % of surfers read every word                                
•        Concept of including active links                                        
•        First paragraph is prime real estate                                   
•        Nora Ephron’s  journalism exercise                                    
•        Quickest way to grab a reader’s attention                          
•        List of powerfully hypnotic openings                                  
•        List of truth statements                                                
•        Objective, target and product knowledge                        
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Chapter 7                                                                        
Clarifies why the need to know every detail about the product you will be selling,
can lead to the “curse of knowledge”.
Explains why it is vital to have a system of writing articles that makes your
message “perfectly clear’” to your reader.
•        Article on the ‘Curse of Knowledge’                              
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Chapter 8                                                                       
This is a short chapter that sets up the scenario of how the human brain “hates”
missing information.
•        “and opened the door to quite a scene”                                

Chapter 9                                                                        
Explains the concept of how the human brain will seek missing information.
Introduces the concept of Clickbank and Ebooks.
Shameless plug to the 4 Day Money Making Blueprint 
Introduces the three things every marketer needs to do before beginning an Article
Marketing Campaign.
Further discusses identifying problems, pains and predicaments.
Explains the need to understand why the customer’s problems have not been
solved.
Discusses the way to provide the “light at the end of the tunnel” for your niche’s
problems
Introduces the concept of the Article Resource Box
•        Leaving something unsaid can keep your reader moving through your
article                                        
•        Know your objective, audience and product                         
•        ‘Nicheing’ down to understand the “conversation”                    
•        Listening to the niche’s problems and why they still have no solution  
•        Painting a clear picture of  how your product will benefit your
reader                                                
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Chapter 10                                                                        
Explains the benefits of the 4 day Money Making Blueprint  and how it provides an
excellent background to Internet Marketing.
Discusses why an article title must have the relevant keywords in it.
Provides examples of techniques to make article titles stand out and provides a   
list of “power words” to include in a title.
Expands on the need for a powerful opening paragraph and discusses the use of
psychological triggers.
Explains why there is the need to make effective use of questions in the opening
paragraph of the article.
Stresses the point that people do not like to be openly sold to
Introduces the technique of asking a question, giving the reader a promise and
appealing to their emotions
Discusses the Ezine Articles Directory, and the problem of appearing too
promotional when submitting articles to them
•        List of title “power words”                                        
•        List of title “how to” words                                        
•        Answering your reader’s “what’s in it for me?”                
•        Using questions the reader has to answer                        
•        100% of decisions to read your article are made after reading the first
paragraph
•        Opening Paragraph Templates                                        
•        Promotional Articles and Ezine                                         
•        List of effective sentence  openings                                
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Chapter 11                                                                        
Uses the character of Marcus to explore the composition of opening paragraphs
and the thought processes that accompany this
Discusses the use of persuasive and suggestive words (presuppositions), and the
use of multiple presuppositions
•        Marcus writes opening paragraphs                                
•        Introduction to presuppositions                                        
•        Use of multiple presuppositions                                        
•        Using fact statements to form presuppositions                
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Chapter 12                                                                     
This is a brief chapter that introduces the technique of combining multiple writing
methods to create a single, powerful message. (Perfect Storm Marketing)
•        Perfect Storm Marketing                                                
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Chapter 13                                                                        
Discusses the advertising technique known as “Inoculation Theory”
Explains the use of ‘warning, attack and strong defence’ in writing.
Notes how to use existing headlines to build a paragraph around, and the power of
using phrases in quotes
Gives examples of using headlines to build powerful opening paragraphs
Discusses how to turn a weak headline into a strong headline and supplies a list of
headline modifiers.
Explains how to get article copy ideas from the “Dummies” books and Amazon
Books (Notes that the titles of books cannot be copyrighted)
Introduces the concept of “why people buy”
•        Inoculation Theory in Advertising                        
•        Warning, attack and defence                                
•        Example” Who Else Wants to...”                        
•        Phrases in Quotes                                                
•        Marcus constructs opening paragraphs                
•        List of headline modifiers                                        
•        Using Amazon and Dummies books                        
•        Book titles cannot be copyrighted                        
•        “How to Understand Why People Buy” by                 
H.E. Warren

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Chapter 14                                                                
A brief story line chapter that underlines the futility of negative thinking
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Chapter 15                                                                
Explains that people ‘buy on emotion not logic”
Discusses that people’s motivation can be driven by instinct wants and needs and
introduces motivation theory through “Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs”
Introduces the concept that if we understand what level of need our product
satisfies, then we are able to target people on that level and not those below it.
Explains the 2 basic thinking patterns of “what’s there” versus “what’s missing”
Discusses the three general ways that people think; thinking in words, thinking in
pictures and thinking using their senses (kinesthetic)
Gives advice on the use of forums to understand how people in a particular niche
feel.
•        People buy on emotion not logic                        
•        Malsow’s Hierarchy Of Needs                                
•        Determining which level of needs a product is aiming to satisfy
•        Is your glass half full or half empty?                        
•        List of kinesthetic feeling/texture words                      
•        List of visual commands                                        
•        List of words for auditory learners                        
•        Go to the forums of your niche                                
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Chapter 16                                                               
Introduces the concept of people having “mental movies” inside their heads about
how life should be, and that getting into their head could influence their buying
actions.
•        The ‘mental movie’ of the bride-to-be who had gained weight
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Chapter 17                                                               
Continues to clarify why people buy on emotion, and then justify their decisions with
logic.
Explains how buying ‘is an emotional experience,’ and that the buyer has
expectations of the experience that must be met
Clarifies the point that when we write articles, we have to write copy that puts our
reader in the right state of mind to buy.
•        Story of Buying a Canon Printer and the sales boy’s indifference
•        Creating a written environment to influence the reader
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Chapter 18                                                                
Explains how story telling is a vivid communication medium and details how people
process stories in their brains. People do not think in pictures.
Discusses how it is possible to move people from point A to point B because the
human brain simulates what is happening in the story. This makes it possible to
influence their buying behaviour.
Introduces the concept of simulation types, outcome simulations, and event
simulations
•        Discussion of studies on how people understand stories
•        Discussion on outcome and event simulation               
•        Articles can tell stories to influence readers to do what we want them to
•        Mental simulation is next best thing to actually being with the prospect
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Chapter 19                                                                
Discusses the concept that an article with the same premise, can be written many
times over, in many different ways
This chapter uses Marcus to mentally review the techniques explained so far and
touches on the use of presupposition and embedding commands
•        Reference to presupposition and Embedded Commands
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Chapter 20                                                                
This chapter reinforces that an article must influence the way the reader feels to be
effective.
Discusses the use of embedded commands in more detail
•        List of words that invoke emotions                        
•        Embedded commands                                        
•        Samples of ways to use embedded commands        
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Chapter 21                                                                
Introduces the use of ‘Linguistic Binds’ in an article to further persuade people what
to do to solve their problem
In particular the Author refers to two specific types of linguistic bind that are
relevant to effective article marketing.
•        Introduction to linguistic binds                                
•        Linguistic bind technique using fact statements        
•        Linguistic bind technique using comparative alternatives
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Chapter 22                                                                
Introduces the concept of understanding the literacy level of our audiences              
Importantly, it may be necessary to “dumb down” article copy to suit our target
audience.
Discusses using simplicity in article copy so that it reaches the greatest number of
readers
Explains a simple technique that keeps the reader interested so they move from
the opening sentences of the article right through to the resource box
•        Sample article by Ed on the US literacy level                 
•        Link to video by Dr Flesch on evaluating audience grade Level
•        Ask a question(or make a statement) and answer it using as few words as
possible.
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Chapter 23                                                                
Continues to discuss the way a question followed by a short answer keeps the
reader moving through an article.
Defines the 8 methods that make the reader transition through the article body  
These are; continuation of thought, authority, asking a question, tell a vivid story,
use a sceptical slant, play reporter, tell what everyone else is saying, and using a
short question and answer.
•        The 8 techniques to ensure your reader moves through your article
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Chapter 24                                                                
Introduces the ‘Gap Theory”, and the technique of arousing curiosity to keep the
reader’s attention.
•        Robert Cialdini’s observation on keeping someone’s attention
•        George Loewenstein and Gap Theory                        
•        How to create effective  gaps in your writing                
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Chapter 25                                                                
Discusses the “feel, felt, found” response.
•        Feel, felt and found response                                
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Chapter 26                                                                        
Explains how the human brain thinks best with concrete as opposed to abstract
concepts
Emphasises the need to always let the reader know there is a way to solve their
problem.  Reviews the foundations of the basic article blueprint
•        Concrete vs Abstract concepts, and how our minds think
•        Review of the 5 points in the Article Writing Blueprint
•        Killer Openings 2nd paragraph                                
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Chapter 27                                                               
Explains why articles are not a performance for the reader’s entertainment.
Emphasises again, the need for proper research before the article is read
Gives a reminder to always think as if “in the prospects shoes”
Introduces the Law of Reciprocation.  Discusses the need to put a value on your
time
•        The goal of article marketing is to lead to a sale
•        Kirby vacuum cleaners and the Law of Reciprocation
•        If your reader does not click your link you have failed as a salesperson
•        Time is a valuable commodity                                
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Chapter 28                                                                
Uses the character of Marcus to write a draft article in the relationships niche
Discusses how to properly format a resource box and gives examples
•        Draft Article by Marcus on fixing a broken relationship
•        The Involvement Device                                          
•        The resource box is where you tell your prospect which action to take.
•        Samples of effective resource boxes.                        
•        Why you should not use your name in your resource
box                                               
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Chapter 29                                                                      

Final pages of the story of Marcus and Ed
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This is just a heart felt thank you
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Writing Secrets!"
It is the single most powerful writing
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I have paid tons of money for other
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I had written my first ten articles
ready for submission and then I
received your email about P.A.W.S.
"WOW".  I cannot imagine anyone
not ordering this ebook. This is
absolutely necessary for anyone
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should be mandatory for any
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Knowledge is power but I also find
that time is of the essence. The
road to success is much shorter
and less painful when someone else
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knowledge and give you a kick start
to a new profession.  
I will now pull my ten articles,insert
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Thank you for sharing your
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I wrote my first article using the
PAWS methods before I even
finished reading the entire course.  
It was published on Ezine  
yesterday and has 34 views and an
amazing 23 URL clicks (that’s a
68% click through to my Squidoo
lens!).  None of my other articles
even come close to that kind of URL
click through percentage.  I’m so
impressed!  .
David – I actually wrote this from the
2 chapters that you sent us before
the entire course was available.  
Pretty impressive.
Tina T
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Jam packed with powerful techniques, templates, hypnotic words,
psychological triggers... and maybe a kitchen sink or two, applying what you
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I'm not a big fan of long sales letters.  However, they work so I'll make this as long
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Most folks do though.  They spend their valuable time writing articles that just are
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"I have just finished reading your
entire new e-book. "PAWS".
David, all I can say as a
testimonial to your work is that if
they were to give a Noble Prize in
Literature for the best book on
article marketing, this fascinating
book would win you that award.  
Case closed.
Told in story form, (which truly
holds the reader's interest as you
also educate him/her) this book
contains such a wealth of
information to help the newbie
individual as to exactly what it
takes to write an effective,
well-written article.  You provide
this information in an
easy-to-follow manner.  
Previous to my purchasing the
book, I had already targeted the
niche that I am focusing my IM
campaign on, (using all of the
methods that you taught in your
course at 4dmmb).  I had even
sketched out a rough draft of what
would have been my first article to
be published, including the all-
important resource box.  
If I had written and submitted the
article to the directories, I am
confident that it would have been
approved for publication,
(including those standards
established at the ezine site).  
But, after reading your e-book,
taking notes, etc., this first article
simply would not have
accomplished what I intended the
article to do.  I doubt that this
original rough draft would have
truly tweaked the interests of my
targeted prospects; causing them
to click on one of the 2 links in my
resource box.
Going through the "PAWS"
book, I was much like the
character Marcus.  I was just like
a sponge, soaking up all of the
incredible information that you
were providing to your readers
about HOW TO write a truly
effective article; from the title,
opening paragraph, second
paragraph, employing the
psychological tricks that you
discussed throughout the book,
everything.
I also truly was amazed with the
video link you provided in the
story.  This link, which dealt with
the MS word document analyzer,
and the need to focus in on
"writing down" to an appropriate
level so that readers could
understand the article was in, and
of itself, invaluable. I always use
the spell-check feature in word
document.  I simply had no idea
that the option of using the
document analyzer was even
available! As you stated in the
video, include me amongst those
percentage of people who were
previously "clueless" about the
document analyzer included in MS
word.
Thank you so much David for
providing all of the amazing
information that you included in
the book's 160+ pages.  It took
me 3 days to read it thoroughly,
assimilating all of the educational
knowledge that you provided.  
Even after the first day, I went to
the 4dmmb forum and wrote a
testimonial in which I encouraged
everyone to buy this book."
Jeff L
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"I wanted to thank you.  I know
you don't know me, and I don't
know you really, but I wanted to
thank you.  It was more than an
excellent book, super tips, and
everything I have been trying to
out about how to write good
articles.
I really got a lot out of the book
and appreciate the way you
"teach without being taught"
similar to" selling without being
sold to!"  To be honest I was
about to give up before reading
this book, now I have some new
found methods, and am ready to
try the out."  
Thanks,
Dennis
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"Better than sliced bread?
You bet! I can honestly say this is
the best book I have ever read
about article marketing. It will
certainly change the way I write
from here on.
I have just had the privilege of
reading an advance copy of
PAWS and cannot believe the
amount of information the book
contains. What an amazing
resource!  I sure wish that I had
the knowledge this book
delivers when I first started writing
articles over a year ago.
The techniques and templates it
contains certainly answer the
questions I have often asked
myself about why readers buy.
Thanks to the book, I now know
how to leverage and structure my
writing to be at its most
effective.
Whether you are a beginner or
experienced article writer, I know
that once you read David’s book
you will never look at article
marketing in the same way again.
It has the power to change the
complete direction
of your internet marketing
business. It is certainly going to
change mine!"
Julie N
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"First of all, a big
congratulations in the successful
completion of PAWS. I bought
the book without hesitation
because I knew that it is exactly
what I need for my article
marketing and I have confidence
that you will produce yet another
quality and spot-on techniques in
this book.
Guess what? I was blown away
after I read the book. You
shared so many techniques and
secrets taught in the book on
why people buy, how to
understand and encourage them
to buy. Or simply make them
realized that they need to buy a
product to ease their pain or gain
pleasure. There are so many
other great techniques taught in
the book that I can't describe
them all here.
When I look back at my articles,
straight away I realized I have
made few mistakes. But I know
that with PAWS knowledge, I will
never write my articles the same
way again. I can't wait to see the
results!
I strongly recommend this book
to everyone. After 4DMMB, this
is by far the best article
marketing education I ever
bought."
Keep it up Dave and God bless.:)
Cheers,
John
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You have taken us on one of the
Most Excellent Online Adventures!

This eBook will PAWSsibly turn into
the Holy Grail for Article Marketers!
Seasoned Writers will Benefit as
well as us Newbie's, and Wannabes!

Tire Kickers Beware you had better
don your steel toe boots, because
David   lays a Concrete Foundation
with his 4D-MMB, then follows it up
with this PAWS eBook that helps us
build our Home-based Store Brick
by Brick!

Thanks Again David & if there is any
more information bottled up inside
you, Please let it out!

Dan
True Testimonial
I purchased your book late last
night and have just finished reading
it.
Can I just thank you for the
information you put into the story. I
am new to article marketing and if it
was not for your video course and
now this book I would have given up
already.

I am still trying to get my head
around the passive sentences but I
am sure this be all become clear
shortly.
Thanks again for your Inspiration
and hope to talk on the membership
forum.
Keep up the good work

Kind Regards
Steve